Has a very oldschool Metallica feel to it, (as in songs like Leper Messiah, The Thing That Should Not Be, etc) I'd just recommend turning the guitar and bass up to help give it a little balls lol. As for the guitar playing, I like the chord progression, very dark sounding. Just work a little bit on the palm muting and stuff like that to get it a little cleaner and more precise. The vocals could definitely use some work, are you fairly new to screaming/growling/whatever technique you're doing?
This definitely has a lot of potential, and if you work on improving the vocals and the tone on the guitar, you should re-upload because I would love to hear it :)